Commentary on replacing the manuscript of the manga ``Secret Palace'' that powered up the drawing
The full-color manga ` `Secret Palace '' currently being serialized in GIGAZINE is impressive for its shocking story in which a girl who calls herself an android suddenly confesses to a lonely girl, ``Marry me'', but it is also a science fiction world with girls. The power of the drawings that depict the characters is also attractive. While revising the production schedule, the author took care of the parts where the drawings were rough due to the busy schedule, so I will explain what changes were made and how.
Manga can be read all at once for free, starting with the first chapter. The latest episode is scheduled to be updated around September 14, 2023, so please enjoy the deep story and beautiful illustrations.
The following is the 4th page of episode 1 of 'The Secret Palace'. This is the page that starts the main story, and it is also the scene where the main character, Kanon, appears, so I added it with more enthusiasm.
Also, on the following page, since this is the first time we see a close-up of her feet, we have carefully redrawn the design according to the setting. In addition, the panel on the left was a rough drawing because it was drawn, but it has also been redrawn more carefully.
The following pages were the most changed in episode 1. This is the page right before Kanon meets Rion for the first time, and since this is an important scene, changes have been made to make the character more appealing overall.
In important scenes or scenes where I want to add contrast, I am particular about showing the characters in more impressive images. The quality of the drawing has been improved on the following pages so that the depiction of ``Kanon who suddenly meets Rinne and is told that she is an android and panics'' is more realistic, and the expression of Kanon who is worried about ``What is he!'' is better conveyed. rise.
On the other hand, there is no problem in drawing unimportant frames or drawings vaguely to some extent, but in the following frames, there is a difference in the drawing between Rinne in the first frame and Kanon and the man in black in the second frame. was large and the second frame was conspicuous, so I made some detailed additions and corrections.
The cover art for the first episode has also been rewritten. The original cover art on the left, and the more detailed redrawn cover art on the right. However, unlike the main story, there is no problem with the design of the cover art even if the lines are vague to some extent, and after consultation, it was decided that ``the feeling of the two people in the original drawing blending together would create a good atmosphere,'' so the page for the main story was replaced with the cover art. It has not been done.
Several additions and corrections have been made to
Also, in the second episode, multiple classmate characters appear, but in the original manuscript, there were several panels where the classmate designs were ambiguous. The classmates will reappear in
Similarly, on the following pages, additions were made mainly by classmates.
Classmates have been redrawn on the following pages as well. In particular, the character with green hair in the fourth panel has a distinctive costume design, so I had a hard time adjusting the structure of the costume when I first drew it.
A page where Kanon and Rinne are alone at the end of episode 2. I wanted to make a more impressive two-shot, so I carefully redrawn the two of them.
Additions to the cover art for episode 2 were also considered. The original cover art on the left, the new cover art on the right.
In this way, we are putting a lot of effort into both the original work and the illustrations to make the work as interesting as possible to read, so please continue to support ``The Secret Palace''. In addition, for this drawing correction, we also took into consideration the comments received through
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